1. Explain the story of your video
- Raph and Simon are at school. Simon realises that he'll be late to school and walks off to tell Raph that the bell has gone. Raph panics and packs up his things in a hurry but trips over the pavement on his way to his lesson.
2. How did you attempt to create 'narrative flow' (continuity)?
- We tried to use a master shot in the second shot - we used a pan to establish where Raph and Simon were in comparison to each other and with the setting.
- In shot 2-3, Simon carries on walking from the same place; he doesn't magically jolt forward.
- We used different angles of Raph in shot 3 and 4 so that the audience can see how he is standing and where he is going to walk when he turns around.
3. Did you achieve full continuity? If not, why not?
- The match-on action doesn't fit together from shot 5-6; Raph falls twice.
- Raph turns his head twice in shot 3-4.
4. In hindsight, what would you do differently to improve the narrative flow of your video and tell your story more effectively?
- Simon should've run after he said he was going to be late to make it more realistic.
- He should've established that he would be late for class when he said it to Raph, that way we wouldn't have to include the scene where Simon spoke to himself.
- In addition, we should've not used cross-cuts right from the very beginning because it throws off the audience.
- I'd make sure the background isn't cluttered in the shot; remove the rubbish bags in the back.
- Shot 1 could've been wider, to establish more of the setting.